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The most brilliant thing about roses is how much they resemble human nature. Born with both fragrance and thorns, the thorns can be felt and seen from a distance. However, these thorns, like the weaknesses of a human, can be removed. Whereas for the magnificent fragrance, like that of a human's positive qualities, once taken in, will never be forgotten and will always be the driving force behind bringing you back fro more. It is this beauty which can only be felt and experienced once you have come close to the rose and truly seen that despite its thorns which can be removed, it's inner beauty is the one which makes the rose so exquisite and unique. That fragrance is much too difficult to remove or extract. It is what gives the rose its identity, And your inner fragrance can and will give you yours...








I wrote it, and I would love to get some feedback! Thank you!Would love some advice on something I've written. Please read...?
I think it's a great start to something awesome. I like the comparison. Would love some advice on something I've written. Please read...?
Just a little edit needed, ';It is this beauty which can only be felt and experienced once you have come close to the rose and truly seen that despite its thorns,.....cut out 'which can be removed' as it sounds repetitive just continue on with ';it's inner beauty is the one...........